Thank you for your hardwork :)
I am so satisfied with your work.
Err.. Is it a place to ask you additional questions about my writing..?
Well, i found some sentence out of tune. A sentence in the secend paragraph from the bottom. 'He has a driving force to maintain all he has gained by his own efforts.’
Like.. For me, it sounds like one irrelevant to the corresponding paragraph's context. What do you think of it?
And
Yeah.. Like you left a comment on my recommendation, the expressions were kind of too much, ending up with describing myself as too perfect.
Then... Do you think i need to add some downsides of mine? Like drawbacks.
For example, i wrote about myself as humble. To give it a bit of change, i am gonna say .. 'this student sometimes seemed a bit more modest than necessary.'
Umm
Do you think i can just hand in the file you finally pass me on?
Or do you think.. I need to add something more referring to your comments ?
Yo Han Jeon(학생, 부산외국어대학교) | 2017-12-26 | 서비스이용 4회
Thank you for your hardwork :) I am so satisfied with your work. Err.. Is it a place to ask you additional questions about my writing..? Well, i found some sentence out of tune. A sentence in the secend paragraph from the bottom. 'He has a driving force to maintain all he has gained by his own efforts.’ Like.. For me, it sounds like one irrelevant to the corresponding paragraph's context. What do you think of it? And Yeah.. Like you left a comment on my recommendation, the expressions were kind of too much, ending up with describing myself as too perfect. Then... Do you think i need to add some downsides of mine? Like drawbacks. For example, i wrote about myself as humble. To give it a bit of change, i am gonna say .. 'this student sometimes seemed a bit more modest than necessary.' Umm Do you think i can just hand in the file you finally pass me on? Or do you think.. I need to add something more referring to your comments ?
이승호(프로그래머, NTS) | 2017-12-26 | 서비스이용 2회
조금더 신경써주시면 더 좋은 첨삭글이 되었을 텐데 아쉬웠습니다.
장문석(프로젝트리스크매니저, 연세대학교) | 2017-12-22 | 서비스이용 2회
원하는 방향으로 완벽하게 교정해주어서 감사합니다.
jihea moon(Designer, Samsung) | 2017-12-22 | 서비스이용 11회
Thanks for your work. You did faster than I expected and my CV looks more organized and professional.
bp | 2017-12-22 | 서비스이용 2회
Highly recommend editor James. The revision elucidated the meaning of each sentence with significantly concise expressions.
장문석(프로젝트리스크매니저, 연세대학교) | 2017-12-22 | 서비스이용 2회
교정결과에 엄청나게 만족합니다. 문장을 원하던 방향으로 깔끔하게 교정해주어서, 교정본을 받자마자 에디터의 전문성이 느껴졌습니다.
김호호(회사원, 호호) | 2017-12-21 | 서비스이용 13회
Thank you for your thoughful and considerate review Your work always satisfies me. Thank you.
jihea moon(Designer, Samsung) | 2017-12-19 | 서비스이용 11회
I'm satisfied with Alexandra's work. Her editing made my essay a lot clear than it was before. Thank you!
jihea moon(Designer, Samsung) | 2017-12-19 | 서비스이용 11회
Max did a good job at capturing the storylines. My essay got much better after his editing. Thank you!
김현우 | 2017-12-17 | 서비스이용 9회
친절하고 빠른 교정에 너무 만족합니다. 특히, 내용 전개에서 논리적 흐름을 놓친 부분이 있었는데 정확히 짚어줘서 적절하게 수정할 수 있었습니다. 다른 분께도 추천합니다.